Sunday, October 10, 2010

A limb, and me out on it.


Well folks, sometimes life gets hard.

Here is something I wrote when life did that, once upon a time.

It helped me then and it still does.  It might be good for other people too.

As the branch creaks ominously under my weight, I realize this post might lose some people, but I hope not.

So, here's to variety.



he found his soul in forgiveness:
he forgave all those who caused him to hurt
the weather and then the earth
for their extremities
then his family
for the cracks in their mortar
his own body as it pained while moving
or lying still
and then most importantly
stunning himself
he forgave his own mind
for its failures of memory and coherence
and at that he realized
he was not any of these things
yet he loved them all



Short stories coming soon.

16 comments:

  1. Yeah, writing usually keeps me out of misery as well, or gets me out of it once I am in it. Keep at it!

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  2. pretty interesting cant wait for the short stories too

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  3. great poem, cant wait for the short stories coming

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  4. Nice, i'm liking it. keep em up.

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  5. I like it. Keep up the work, whether prose or poetry.

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  6. Finding a soul through forgiveness and appreciation is a great way to live. I love your blogs. Thank you.

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  7. Well I did not expect this poem to be well received, so thanks everyone!

    Lexxie, your response was the best I've gotten so far - thanks for taking the time to write it.

    I agree with your points and am going the 1,000 words-per-day route so I can turn the undeveloped part into at least partially formed.

    I'll be reworking this poem with punctuation in the next few days.

    It was originally written in a journal with punctuation, but I took it out to try to let the line-breaks do the pausing. I think you're right though, so I'll give it a few iterations before I repost it.

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  8. oh, that was pretty good. :)
    I usually don't like poems, so I suppose yours must be good if I actually liked it :D

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